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I would like you to proofread/rewrite the essay. Make sure it flows well and that its built logically. If you feel the need to delete anything as its unnecessary and its just taking up space go ahead. Specifically for the “Effectiveness of Ombudsman in Comparison to Ombudsmen and Judicial Review” I would like you to find a case relating to that to further prove the point being made and so the argument would be stronger. This is all based in the UK so make sure you find a case in the UK. And perhaps add more legislation to the analysis as well. All citation done as footnotes (following OSCOLA referencing)